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Fic: Third Time's the Charm

Title: Third Time's the Charm
Author: C'est moi~
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key [JongKey]
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
A/N: I actually thought of this last night when it was hard for me to go to sleep, and I spent the day thinking of how it would end up. And thank you xxtule17xx for reading this before I posted.


Jonghyun was lying awake in bed again. This was the fourth night. The fourth night alone. The fourth night with no warmth. And the fourth night with no Kibum. Usually Kibum would come back after something like this. He had the first two times. Except, Jonghyun didn’t feel so confident this time. He was actually sort of worried.

He went back to the morning of that first night he was alone.

“I’m serious, Jjong.” Kibum did sound serious, but Jonghyun still didn’t believe it. He was sure he’d come crawling back. It was like that in the past.

“You think I’m kidding. I’m sick of it, Jonghyun.” Jonghyun chuckled. He did think Kibum was kidding. But the smirk on his face was quickly wiped off as the ring he’d given Kibum two years ago was pressed into his hand.

“Keep it, I won’t be needing it any longer.” Jonghyun froze. Kibum had never given back the ring before. He looked at his own ring, remembering the promise they’d made to be together for eternity. He remembered the fragile smile on Kibum’s face. It was before Jongyun had started sleeping around. He hadn’t even dared to think about betraying him back then.

“Wait, don’t you think you’re being a bit too rash?” Now it was Kibum’s turn to snicker. “Really, Jjong? Am I? This is the third time I’ve caught you cheating, and I’m being rash by breaking up with you?” He laughed, saying his goodbye and turning to leave before Jonghyun grabbed his shoulder.

Jonghyun’s eyes widened at the tears cascading down Kibum’s face. Shocked, he loosened his grip on Kibum’s shoulder. “Ki—“ He didn’t get to finish as Kibum shoved him away.


Jonghyun still remembered the cold look on his face. At that moment, Jonghyun hated himself. He knew Kibum was serious.

On this fourth night, Jonghyun knew that all hope was lost. That he had really broken Kibum and he wasn’t coming back. He still remembered the words Kibum muttered under his breath when he walked away, his voice shaking.

“Third time’s the charm.”

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A/N: Ugh, I really hate the the title and the last line XD Comments are ♥
Tags: !fic, p: jonghyun/key
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Ohhhh but I likes it! Cheating Jonghyun, I don't know how but I like the way it was played off. I'm such a fan of simple fics like these.

Also, just curious but did the italics get extended too far?

I like the third time's a charm thing and (don't hate me for giving advice pls) maybe it's just me but I like 'third time's the charm' instead of 'third time's a charm'?
Haha thanks. :)

Oh wow, they did. XD Thanks.

That's what I was thinking! But I looked it up and I guess I just went with the first time I saw. Tysm. ^_^
omggg.

why. whyyy.

;A;

Jjong. you. you. you basterd~

ㅠ_ㅠ
oh, and omg. you're listening to yelle~

'ㅂ'

Hehe I knoww. It seems like I always see Jjong as the type to cheat XD

Yess, I love Yelle. ♥
hahah yes, he does seem like sucha playboy.

LOL. I remember telling my friend I imagine Jjong with so many girls around him during their predebut days, then he goes and show me this picture of Jjong surrounded by his guy friends. xD He looked drunk or something, and like. idk. hahah. idek why i rambled on about that. sorry. ^^"

and yes, I love yelle too~ 8D

sodonii_chan

7 years ago

forevershining

7 years ago

sodonii_chan

7 years ago

forevershining

7 years ago

D8 Stupid, stupid Jonghyun.
Why would you sleep around when you have sex on legs RIGHT THERE?! I mean of course Jonghyun is sex on legs too, but thats why they match so perfectly!.
XD It seems like that doesn't it?! But I guess he doesn't realize it. T_T
** sigh ** men..
they're such idiots
XD Couldn't agree more.
brb beating up jjong
Lmfao. Fix Key's heart while you're at it.

Thanks for commenting~ ♥
thing is I can totally imagine Jjong doing this..which is
sorta sad ;_________; HOW CAN HE CHEAT ON SOMEONE
WHO IS SEX PERSONIFIEDD. RAH.

but I digress, lovely writing, just the right amount of angst to
complete everything <3
Ikr?! It just seems like something he'd do.
XDD

Thank you~ ♥
hehe liked it i should get to writting my own now...
Lol you should! And thanks for helping me.
i really didnt help but je t'en prie...

sodonii_chan

7 years ago

xxtule17xx

7 years ago

sodonii_chan

7 years ago

xxtule17xx

7 years ago

Aw, poor Key! He stayed even though Jjong was a total idiot. I am a little in love with JongKey angst so I am of course LOVIN this fic!!
XD Same here. I can't seem to write anything but angst with JongKey really. But fluff is nice too lol.
ups! Jjong just was dumped by Key!
I like this.. XD
I like to see Jjong needs Key's love :P

but yeah I love if they are together ^^
Haha idk why but I like it when that happens too.

Same. :) Thanks for the comment and btw, your icon is ♥~
so you will make a fic like this too? please~ :D

your ison is &hearts too! XD

sodonii_chan

7 years ago

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XD

I knowwwww. It's seems whenever it comes to JongKey all I can write is angst and all I can write is JongKey. :(( I need a JongKey fluff hehe.

XD It's okayy. Thank youu. I don't think my writing is all that great but you make me feel better about it :D Ty bb~ ♥

hugsss kibum for all that happen
somehow jjong kind of have a hard time to keep the pants still to one person :D